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WIP - In Here (Tentative Title)
« on: January 29, 2016, 03:17:08 am »
Here's a song that I have been working on for the past day or so.

I would like for you guys to have any opinions on it. Don't sugarcoat it. Make it real smoky. The feedback will make this song so much better.


Things that will be done:
- Vocals (with vocoder!)

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Re: WIP - In Here (Tentative Title)
« Reply #1 on: February 14, 2016, 03:19:24 am »
The track was updated massively


Once again, let me know what you think!

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Re: WIP - In Here (Tentative Title)
« Reply #2 on: February 15, 2016, 11:54:29 am »
Don't sugarcoat it. Make it real smoky.

Okie dokie then.


It needs:
- A chord structure
- More interesting melodies
- Definitelly a lot less distortion
- Some cross-fx like build ups or noise effects or something
"Earth is round right? Look at it from right angle and you'll be always on top of the world."
...but don't overdo it, because that's called being a d***k.

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Re: WIP - In Here (Tentative Title)
« Reply #3 on: February 15, 2016, 04:17:11 pm »
Wow! I would have never thought of any of those things by myself! I'll make sure to put all of those things in mind! Especially after adding the vocals (the only thing that's missing before doing the fine-tuning :o )

- A chord structure

I have been a lover of single-note instruments since I started producing, but you have a point. I'm sure it's time to start working with chords. I'll see what works.

- More interesting melodies

Yeah the same melody's pretty boring when played over and over. Vocals may fix that, but I'll see if I can spice up the boring parts, especially when the song just starts.

- Definitelly a lot less distortion

Now I'm not sure what you meant, but it could mean the main instrument sounds too hard (power waves am I right?) or the amplifier I placed into the sub is messing with everything else. I'll see what I can do.

- Some cross-fx like build ups or noise effects or something

No problem!

Thanks again for the feedback. It has been very valuable owo-b

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Re: WIP - In Here (Tentative Title)
« Reply #4 on: February 15, 2016, 04:43:54 pm »
Something I would do, transpose the saw pad to -12(down 1  octave), filter the high-end with automation to build some tension before that majestic arp. I was listening on my phone speakers and couldn't tell if you had a kick? If you do, side chain it.