Hey guys! I've been working on this for a few months now, and I think I'm on the right track towards finishing it, but I could definitely use some feedback.

https://soundcloud.com/apollonashmusic/id-in-a-world-filled

progressive house isn't my thing usually but I am really feeling this one

Super refreshing... I'd try layering a kick with some more sub in there (only small/short though).

The pluck gets a bit loud around 3.52, and takes away from the otherwise immersive effect of the track. The outro section is also a little abrupt, could definitely be smoother. Nice work though!

Thank you guys for the feedback!

Super refreshing... I'd try layering a kick with some more sub in there (only small/short though).

Would it be a bad idea to throw in a synth thats playing a sine wave in the key of my kick and process that with the kick I already have? I know searching for another kick sample would be easier to do, but I've seen another production vid where someone did that, but I'm not sure how effective that really is.

Feedback

Thank you for breaking down each section that stuck out to you. I'll play around with the plucks some more and work on that outro!

Hi man,

I'm really surprised honestly, been browsing this sub for a while and this is by far the best demo I've come across, congratz on that! 

The demo, sounds pretty good, but some things that bother me:

- It lacks elements, I'm pretty sure this is because it's a WIP and because this style doesn't abuse instruments but I'd love to hear more elements, FX, percs.
- The hats sounds a bit off the mix, I don't know exactly why, but for some reason they don't feel good with the rest of the track, on the other hand the piano and pads mesh really well.
- I dont really like the melody variation you added at the end of the drop, it seems to have too much pauses and the sound it's a bit too loud, try making it less pluck-y.

Hope this helps, I really think this can be a great tune