It's quite bizarre. The hi hats are almost completely panned to one speaker, and they're too loud.
The bass hook you've got is also too loud and kind of distorted? At speakers half way my entire room shakes. 30 seconds of the song is too bland and takes too long to progress, or doesn't really have enough elements in it to keep it interesting.
The piano/mallet around 1 minute doesn't really flow into the start of the song, and i just generally dont feel like the two themes blended together well at all towards the end of the song.
At 1 minute there's just too much going on, the amount of notes the glockenspiel or piano is playing is just trying to compete with the bass hook and the vocal slice.
I've always said this, if you're going to have an aggressive sound, you can't be playing other aggressive sounds at the same time - if you're going to, you really have to know what you're doing.
I found some parts of the glockenspiel-thingo kinda cool though, where you played a bunch of notes real fast. I actually found that pretty interesting,
good luck!
