Author Topic: Been sat on this track for about a year - I NEED HELP! (Techno/House)  (Read 4953 times)

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I've been sat on this track for about a year and I really like the way it sounds - but I feel like something is missing/can be changed...?

Any help/feedback/criticism will be much appreciated :)

Thanks!!

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Re: Been sat on this track for about a year - I NEED HELP! (Techno/House)
« Reply #1 on: January 26, 2016, 08:43:23 pm »
really like this one, the bass might be a little too shakey tho try n make it cleaner. i wanna hear ur recent stuff, im interested !

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Re: Been sat on this track for about a year - I NEED HELP! (Techno/House)
« Reply #2 on: January 27, 2016, 05:56:30 am »
This just tripped me out man haha. It's got great flow I don't have to strain my ears to hear it. I think maybe the missing part you feel could be in the low mid range area. Maybe try and have something more side focused around the low mids. Like a deep house arp sound. Also play with automated panning through the mix to freshen it up.
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Re: Been sat on this track for about a year - I NEED HELP! (Techno/House)
« Reply #3 on: January 27, 2016, 06:15:23 am »
Really dig the flow of the first drop, it just gets stale for me, try automating some reverb or some delay to keep things interesting.

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Re: Been sat on this track for about a year - I NEED HELP! (Techno/House)
« Reply #4 on: January 27, 2016, 06:19:30 am »
Definitely can use some melodic groove to keep things interesting! Very percussive!

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Re: Been sat on this track for about a year - I NEED HELP! (Techno/House)
« Reply #5 on: January 27, 2016, 12:41:17 pm »
Thanks guys!

I'll do some tweaking, add some stuff here and there and post an update!


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Re: Been sat on this track for about a year - I NEED HELP! (Techno/House)
« Reply #6 on: January 27, 2016, 01:38:01 pm »
This is really awesome, amazing and relaxing vibes, just maybe too repetitive for my taste, anyway it's very nice quality, lookind forward to hear more from you!