I like this it reminds me of OG Bassnectar or some minimal techno shit. I think if you tighten up your kick sample and give it a nice clean attack it will help glue the elements together. But as for a start I think it's dope you should keep working on it!
damn that drops violating. i like those kicks, reminds me of that pure "nothingness" feel when the bass n kicks wreck ur brain. idk if im down w the intro melody, i like the scattered drum hits in the beginning too