Author Topic: SUTT'N - Roaming|Progressive House  (Read 4537 times)

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SUTT'N - Roaming|Progressive House
« on: January 25, 2016, 09:39:56 am »
Something I have just finished, first track as my new alias SUTT'N hope you like it, cheers!

https://soundcloud.com/suttn/suttn-roaming-original-mix

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Re: SUTT'N - Roaming|Progressive House
« Reply #1 on: January 26, 2016, 08:12:54 pm »
It's a really nice sound, lush, wide, and the track flows correctly, it does't jar 

It might benefit from a central something, such as a vocal or a melody / lead instrument that ties the two halves together, as currently the pad seems to be doing that and really that's noted ideal instrument to carry the track - that's noticeable when the 'verse' part drops energy after the height of the drop part - yes, that's kind of the point but without the linking pat, it feels like the energy goes a little too much down.  Linking and riding passages is something I find difficult sometimes too, especially when they are so distinct and differing and it's not always obvious that's what it needs. 

Here, given its melodic qualities, I'd definitely see if you can get a vocal on it, female if possible, to bring the track together, bring it alive.

Hope that's helpful!
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Re: SUTT'N - Roaming|Progressive House
« Reply #2 on: January 26, 2016, 11:52:34 pm »
Yeah I definitely hear what you are saying and I totally agree, as for a vocal I am at this stage looking for a female vocal to put on it no luck yet but will keep trying, thank you for your feedback means a lot, cheers ;D

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Re: SUTT'N - Roaming|Progressive House
« Reply #3 on: January 27, 2016, 05:43:06 am »
Synth on the drop has a bit too much reverb, needs a bit more detail to it, I feel like it needs more synths layered on and glued together to make a more cohesive sound. One other area for improvement, you can practice your making your percussion more interesting and that will help it alot. I really do like the piano bits though, you're well on your way to making a lot better tunes in the future, keep at it.

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Re: SUTT'N - Roaming|Progressive House
« Reply #4 on: February 01, 2016, 02:01:07 pm »
Thanks mate, I will take everything you have said on board and use it with my future tracks, appreciate the feedback, also love your track "Just Us" nice work!

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Re: SUTT'N - Roaming|Progressive House
« Reply #5 on: February 01, 2016, 07:31:36 pm »
Feels very muted to me. Like it's missing some shine on the top end.