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Despair (Kinda Original) | Sorta cute house song with a YYYs vocal
« on: January 23, 2016, 05:44:35 am »
A lot of my producer friends have been telling me that the vocal sounds odd or out of place to them, but I just don't hear it! Maybe I've been listening to it too much.. I'd appreciate your guys' feedback!

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Re: Despair (Kinda Original) | Sorta cute house song with a YYYs vocal
« Reply #1 on: January 23, 2016, 08:21:38 pm »
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The vocal mostly works up until about 0:39 but the next ten seconds or so sound kinda off.. the timing goes out and it sounds like it's being sung to different chords than the ones they've used. Hope that helps
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Re: Despair (Kinda Original) | Sorta cute house song with a YYYs vocal
« Reply #2 on: January 25, 2016, 11:15:02 pm »
Thanks man, really appreciate the feedback! I'll go back in and adjust it. If anyone has any ideas on how to make the vocal to fit the track that'd be awesome
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