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Przemoemo

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My own uplifting trance track
« on: January 21, 2016, 11:31:47 pm »
Let me know guys what do you think about my track (any advices are important to me :) )

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Re: My own uplifting trance track
« Reply #1 on: January 22, 2016, 09:58:14 am »
At 1:50, your leads are bit quiet in my opinion. Break sounds good, except for the snares coming in at 3:28, try to EQ them better because they sound muddy to me. Try to make the drop at 3:55 more powerfull. I would put a High pass filter on the leads just before the drop comes in.

Also, the whole track could use more bass. Your kickdrum sounds a bit quiet in the low frequenties, as well as the actual bass.
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Re: My own uplifting trance track
« Reply #2 on: January 22, 2016, 10:25:53 am »
Hey man!

Your track sounds awesome. Especially the break with the angel voice are really comforting to my ears.
Only critic I can give you is the kick. When the beat drops there is no bass at all :o

The strings, synths and angel voices are amazing though.

Keep up the good work!  ;)

 
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Re: My own uplifting trance track
« Reply #3 on: January 22, 2016, 03:53:51 pm »
needs a good beefy off beat sine/saw wave to thicken up the bass, nice track though
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Re: My own uplifting trance track
« Reply #4 on: January 22, 2016, 05:03:31 pm »
Excellent choice of elements :) Maybe try working on the build up into the drop?

You could try using a filter to roll off the low end into the build up.
and drop the volume by 1 db gradually over 8 bars and bring it back up at the 1st beat of the drop.

Hope that makes sense :)
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Re: My own uplifting trance track
« Reply #5 on: January 22, 2016, 10:50:30 pm »
Really good stuff! I really enjoy your breakdown. Very ambient and emotional. I would try to get more low end in there. The kick punches super hard but there's basically no low end during the drop.

Keep it up!
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