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produced by emotions
« on: January 21, 2016, 10:02:15 pm »
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Re: produced by emotions
« Reply #1 on: January 21, 2016, 10:19:28 pm »
Like it - cool sounds. I like the juxtaposition between the contemplative mood in the intro and the upbeat synth melody starting at 1:09. It caught me off guard, in a good way. I like the waves crashing (?) in the background and the weird bells chiming reverb at the end.

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Re: produced by emotions
« Reply #2 on: January 22, 2016, 08:56:46 pm »
https://m.soundcloud.com/apeidon/i-cant-even-breath-when-i-remember ive made this today, just an idea.
fucking love part at 0:23, is it just a shitton distortion?

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Re: produced by emotions
« Reply #3 on: January 22, 2016, 09:29:05 pm »
https://m.soundcloud.com/apeidon/i-cant-even-breath-when-i-remember ive made this today, just an idea.
fucking love part at 0:23, is it just a shitton distortion?
It's a piano with simple but heavy distortion, i think that many times, a simple thing can be much better than a super  elaborated process :)
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Re: produced by emotions
« Reply #4 on: January 22, 2016, 09:31:50 pm »
Like it - cool sounds. I like the juxtaposition between the contemplative mood in the intro and the upbeat synth melody starting at 1:09. It caught me off guard, in a good way. I like the waves crashing (?) in the background and the weird bells chiming reverb at the end.
Thank you!! yea, they are waves crashing, i really like kinda atmospheric natural sounds. Ty for the comment! :]
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Re: produced by emotions
« Reply #5 on: January 22, 2016, 10:08:20 pm »
It sounds really good and clean overall.

However at around 1.07 it starts to get a bit crowded and I think the melody is a bit weird, it sounds too happy and out of key to me. The sidechain is really nice and subtle, but after 1.07 it starts sounding somehow weird, not sure why exactly.

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Re: produced by emotions
« Reply #6 on: January 23, 2016, 11:21:13 am »
Good work! Just like the person above me said, the melody at 1:07 is a bit to crowded.. But the rest sounds good. Reminded me of Porter Robinson at some point, so thats a good thing ;)

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Re: produced by emotions
« Reply #7 on: January 23, 2016, 12:20:33 pm »
The part between 0:26 - 0:42 sounds really good. Well done.

And yeah, I'll reiterate what others already have said: the introduced melody at 1:07 sounds very out of place.

I would also like the kick's top-end to be more transient. It sort of drowns in the mix after 1:07. Try using a Transient Shaper on the kick and see what happens. You can also amplify the transients with intricate multi band-compression.

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Re: produced by emotions
« Reply #8 on: January 23, 2016, 02:49:31 pm »
The part between 0:26 - 0:42 sounds really good. Well done.

And yeah, I'll reiterate what others already have said: the introduced melody at 1:07 sounds very out of place.

I would also like the kick's top-end to be more transient. It sort of drowns in the mix after 1:07. Try using a Transient Shaper on the kick and see what happens. You can also amplify the transients with intricate multi band-compression.
ive made a few changes, https://soundcloud.com/apeidon/i-cant-even-breath-when-i-remember-1
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