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mrocho

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Feelings | one track off of my mini EP
« on: January 21, 2016, 06:51:39 pm »
https://soundcloud.com/mrocho/feelings?in=mrocho/sets/always-dreaming-ep

So this is one of the songs off of a mini EP I put out a few months back.  Any and all feedback is greatly appreciated! :)

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Re: Feelings | one track off of my mini EP
« Reply #1 on: January 21, 2016, 09:56:39 pm »
You've got a groove going, so that's good, but there is no melody, harmony, chords, etc. There isn't much variation in instrument type. There isnt much in the way of transitions or different parts to the song like chorus, drop, verse, etc. The song at 1 minute switches into something completely different  there doesnt seem to be much continuity. Also the song fades out quickly at the end. Long story short, I would try to come up with a lead melody or chord progression or something to go along with the nice groove youve got - and try to give it some structure.