The idea is cool. But I think it could use a decent build up, especially durning the 1:00 to 1:05 part. MY advice would be to play around more with the automation of the pluck, to get the feeling your building up to something.

The part starting at 1:53 is dope! Reminds me alot of the old Zedd, which is a good thing! But again, I would say to try and make a better build up. If you work it out it could be very cool. Good luck with it! 

Sounds great, very Zedd-ish. Arrangement is great, melodies are great. Probably just needs some more instruments to add some depth/variation. The vocal humming (?) at around 3 minutes I don't like so much. Would def listen to this song again though, good work.