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JohnnyJ94

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Trance 2.0 Track
« on: January 20, 2016, 11:57:29 pm »
Hey guys, was wondering if some of you could give me feedback on this. Thanks. https://soundcloud.com/twinskies/white-potato-unfinished-2/s-APtUd Hope the new link works guys. Had it on private, forgot haha.
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Re: Trance 2.0 Track
« Reply #1 on: January 21, 2016, 09:54:17 am »
The link is dead
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JohnnyJ94

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Re: Trance 2.0 Track
« Reply #2 on: January 21, 2016, 03:44:35 pm »
Updated it with the new link.
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Re: Trance 2.0 Track
« Reply #3 on: January 21, 2016, 05:18:07 pm »
Link still dead.
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JohnnyJ94

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Re: Trance 2.0 Track
« Reply #4 on: January 21, 2016, 06:59:04 pm »
Nope. It works for me, it's there and it's working for a few others.
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Re: Trance 2.0 Track
« Reply #5 on: January 21, 2016, 07:59:45 pm »
 ¯\_(ツ)_/¯ I'm in the 'not working for me' camp
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Re: Trance 2.0 Track
« Reply #6 on: January 21, 2016, 08:41:10 pm »
Yea, link isn't working. You sure you don't have the track set to private? If so you need to use the link that shows up when you click the share button.
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JohnnyJ94

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Re: Trance 2.0 Track
« Reply #7 on: January 21, 2016, 09:36:28 pm »
Yea the new link should work. Let me know :P
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Re: Trance 2.0 Track
« Reply #8 on: January 21, 2016, 10:26:59 pm »
Overall I liked the groove and chords and melodic ideas. Didn't like the instrument with reverb or delay that came in at 2 minutes. Or maybe its the envelope I didnt like. Starts out weak and increases in volume and then fades out each time it plays with the reverb a little off-time. Also not much bass going on in this song it seems. It sounds like the song is missing a melody or a hook. Good start though.
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JohnnyJ94

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Re: Trance 2.0 Track
« Reply #9 on: January 21, 2016, 10:44:30 pm »
Quote from: Shmillionaire on January 21, 2016, 10:26:59 pm
Overall I liked the groove and chords and melodic ideas. Didn't like the instrument with reverb or delay that came in at 2 minutes. Or maybe its the envelope I didnt like. Starts out weak and increases in volume and then fades out each time it plays with the reverb a little off-time. Also not much bass going on in this song it seems. It sounds like the song is missing a melody or a hook. Good start though.

Thanks for the feedback man. Yeah wasn't to sure about the sound that came in around the two minute mark, maybe I'll do something different with it. There's Bass, I just decided not to have it be all that strong, maybe I'll change that though. Thanks again.
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Re: Trance 2.0 Track
« Reply #10 on: January 22, 2016, 07:00:10 am »
Overall, great track and melody! At the :14 mark or so it was a little awkward transition before the clap came in. With that said, you should try and use some fx that aren't to harsh like some short sweeps.
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JohnnyJ94

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Re: Trance 2.0 Track
« Reply #11 on: January 22, 2016, 08:09:54 pm »
Quote from: dxnny47 on January 22, 2016, 07:00:10 am
Overall, great track and melody! At the :14 mark or so it was a little awkward transition before the clap came in. With that said, you should try and use some fx that aren't to harsh like some short sweeps.

Thanks man, glad you like it! I've added a bit to the track now and have finished it haha, will probably post a link to it in the finished section.
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