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Frederick

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New track I made I would love some feedback! :)
« on: January 20, 2016, 10:48:41 pm »
https://soundcloud.com/frederickv/ayudflasd/s-C7vo7

Allright I made this, and I know it sucks but I just cant figure out why. What am I doing wrong.

Would love some feedback on ur thoughts on the cohesion of the track. How the transitions go. And what ur ideas are on what couldve been improved.

Thanks in advance.
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manducator

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Re: New track I made I would love some feedback! :)
« Reply #1 on: January 20, 2016, 11:19:47 pm »
What I like about the track:

- The melody is nice!
- The synth stabs (which come in @ 0:45) work nice together with the synth from the start.
- The arrangement is simple but effective.
- The hihg pitched synth (angelic voices) adds a special beautiful mood to the song.

What I would change about the song

- I don't like th sound of the drums, the kick lacks power.
- The drum programming needs more variation, add drumfills or something.
- There's a lead starting @ 2:15 and it stops @ 2:46. and it never comes back. How about changing the rhythm of that lead and let it grow in the break after 3 minutes. The part after 3 minutes need some more excitement.
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Frederick

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Re: New track I made I would love some feedback! :)
« Reply #2 on: January 21, 2016, 05:45:39 pm »
Thank you so much man!

Changing the rythm of that lead is actually a really nice idea. I will try it. But for now im a little sick of this song. Cant hear it anymore :(

Also I get that u dont like the kick. Tried to get a quieter punchier kick for this one. But it doesnt really sound that nice. Agreed.

I really needed to get someone's opinion on this. Thanks again.
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Re: New track I made I would love some feedback! :)
« Reply #3 on: January 21, 2016, 10:08:10 pm »
I like the timing of the chord changes, makes the song interesting. However it sounds like its missing a lead melody over the top of this. Drums need more variation along with transitions, buildups, drops.
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