Ur drum work on this one is pretty solid. Really good job on some of the perc sounds they really fit.
Tho I really hate ur synthwork. I think they are plain saws which got a little filtered. nothing is cohesive to me, and the mix sometimes feels a little empty. Try to work more on your sound design in general.
Also arrangement wise it sometimes got a little repetitive after a while.
Solid work but it can be much better.