Author Topic: Progressive WIP.. I think this one's almost "finished".. any thoughts at all!  (Read 4409 times)

will.crockford

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Hey all, here is a Progressive ID I put on here earlier about a week ago. I've worked on the EQ'ing but could use any criticism you guys may have. I'm thinking it's pretty close to being done even though I'll probably edit it anyway after I release it. How can I make it better? Any thoughts at all are greatly appreciated!

https://soundcloud.com/will-crockford/will-crockford-kid-stuff-unmastered/s-B5rUj

Thanks!

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I'm missing some kind of sub bass. I'm listening with headphones, so maybe with monitors it's different, but for now I would say work on your bass some more. Other than that, it sounds cool, love what you did with the vocals! :)

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The kick is really weak. The dance chords are overpowering the whole mix.

I would lower the dance piano /chords and add some more sidechain. It is really hard to give feedback because all I can hear are the dance chords. I also feel the ooh ah screams are a bit out of place.

Some chord variation would be cool too, because it's a bit too repetitive as it is now.

With some tweaking and fixing it's a solid dance track.