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shaun_joseph

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Shaun Joseph - Start
« on: January 18, 2016, 06:03:37 pm »
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I know this might sound like a shitty track, and that is why I'm here...

would be great if I could have critics...
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Re: Shaun Joseph - Start
« Reply #1 on: January 18, 2016, 07:03:46 pm »
at the drop sounds like theres to much stuff trying to shine through like the bassline was loud so i couldnt really tell if i should listen to the bassline or the chords
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Re: Shaun Joseph - Start
« Reply #2 on: January 18, 2016, 08:26:36 pm »
I agree take at that background siren thing on the chorus and keep it simple and wide. I think that will contrast nicely with your very packed verses. It'll create contrast.
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Re: Shaun Joseph - Start
« Reply #3 on: January 20, 2016, 06:22:11 am »
Thanks guys.... Will take all the feedback into account for future works.

A little of background from me:

No musical background
Never played any musical instrument
Using Ableton for about two months... And made this track...

And of course...listen to shit loads of edm....
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