congratulations on finishing your first track! I have had the same problem for years, and im sure we're not alone. Its one thing to make a great idea, its another to take the listener on a journey and tell a story for 4-5 minutes. good job!

im not gonna try to nit pick your track but ill give one recommendation.  The new bass that comes in at 3:24 needs to have a different rhythm so it can be more dancy or catchy. It sticks out like a sore thumb in the context of the track because it sounds kind of lazy, because I know you can do better than that based on hearing everything else you created.

great job again and take care 

Great execution, good sounds good stuff in general. I like how you opened the filter on the stab to make it a full lead towards the end, truly progressive if you will. Just kinda generic imo.

I like your melody stops around the 2 minute mark and you have the quick 32 note arps. Transitions nicely. Good sound selection.
The bass at 3:24. I somewhat agree you could switch up the rhythm and give it more swing. But it's not bad at all. Just preference really.