1st Listen:Simple track. It definitely embraces the synthetic sound of the instruments.
2nd & 3rd Listen:Some of volume contrasts (1:27, 3:24) are abrasive unless you're waiting for them. 4:08 is notable as it is the ONLY departure from the main theme. Even 2:16 is a repetition of the same chord progression... maybe this could be the first appearance of the progression at 4:08, and later recapitulate it in the other arrangement.
4th & 5th Listen:I noticed and enjoyed the stereo delays on the lead in the quiet areas. I see my Phase Analysis' mono compatibility meter flipping in some of these areas... I wouldn't worry about it too much. You might hear some unexpected volume dips on some inexpensive bluetooth speakers or something. I just noticed, I hear VERY few sound effects (a few rises)... and also few effects on sound (something neat at 2:11!).
The composition is melodically rich... but I feel like you could stand to exhibit more breadth in production technique. Maybe a jaunt through TPF would anoint you with a larger arsenal to employ. Also, giving feedback on other tracks will help you think analytically about your own music. Hope to see you around TPF.
