that intro is so good, that drops gotta kill tho. really leave some space for it n add a cool fill or just let the buildup slide n have the drums wreck it. if u were going fr the more chill vibe, i think u pretty much nailed it..its  like 2 am n i cant listen to the mixing- what do i know i dont know how to listen to that mixing stuff......anyways i like the pic, seems very..heartwarming