Author Topic: (WIP) Deeper Love [Future Bass Remix] | What should I improve on?  (Read 6303 times)

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I've been really trying to expand what genres I work with, and I decided to try my hand at future bass.  So here's something that's a bit experimental for me.  I'd love to get some advice and feedback on this because I don't really dabble in future bass that much.  I've only spent 5 hours on it, so it's still a bit on the rough side.

Side note: I'm also working on a future bass remix of Emoji by Pegboard Nerds.  I might upload that one a little later though if anyone wants to hear that as well.

https://soundcloud.com/forgottenparallelsofficial/botnek-i-see-monstas-deeper-love-forgotten-parallels-remix-1/s-0gUwE
« Last Edit: January 19, 2016, 03:36:26 am by Forgotten Parallels »
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Re: (WIP) Deeper Love [Future Bass Remix]
« Reply #1 on: January 18, 2016, 05:07:03 am »
sounds cool dude, love the intro, however in the drop the main lead definitely needs to be louder and more pronounced. also sounds a little muddy so a high pass would help that. overall sounds great and cool idea!

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Re: (WIP) Deeper Love [Future Bass Remix]
« Reply #2 on: January 18, 2016, 11:17:15 pm »
sounds cool dude, love the intro, however in the drop the main lead definitely needs to be louder and more pronounced. also sounds a little muddy so a high pass would help that. overall sounds great and cool idea!

Thanks, I still need to work on the mixing and mastering.  I usually finish the composition before I get into the mixing and mastering, haha.
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Re: (WIP) Deeper Love [Future Bass Remix] | What should I improve on?
« Reply #3 on: January 19, 2016, 10:47:46 pm »
The lead needs more character. I'd suggest turning it into a pluck, and dropping it an octave for starters. After that I'd add some effects to it, you can decide which effects you want to use. Other than that, and what's already been mentioned, it sounds good so far! :)

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Re: (WIP) Deeper Love [Future Bass Remix] | What should I improve on?
« Reply #4 on: January 19, 2016, 10:55:47 pm »
Has some great potential! Like the rest, try to work on the main lead. Maybe by layering it and I would sugest to put a good reverb on it. Also I'm missing some punch in the kick, it sounds like it doesn't come trough very good.

Keep working on it, the idea is great!