Pretty good start man. Just switch up the melody and stuff and you could be the next wave racer! I would say a few things need a little more reverb or delays whichever you fancy.

This gives me like a anime/ Japanese vibe HAHAHAH. Anyways, it's really hard to distinguish a drop in this.

This gives me like a anime/ Japanese vibe HAHAHAH. Anyways, it's really hard to distinguish a drop in this.

Funny you mentioned that, because that´s exactly what i´m going for! hahahaha! i actually have a few samples form an anime show i plan on using!
Please elaborate, do you mean like it´s not "heavy" enough? or is it composition wise?

arvellan_design:
Great tip! will definitely work out something like that!

Yeah, like it's not like heavy enough. It just feels like you build up, and then go to another pre drop. You get me?

i get ya, man! maybe widening the saw a bit, + some reverb will fix this bitch...
thanks for the feedback though! appreciate it.

Really cool idea, just adding to the feedback above: More variation, maybe even an arp in the back of the mix and a nice chunky bass to layer with your sub in the corresponding areas and i think you'll have some decent stuff here! Also i found your vocal samples to be a bit empty. Maybe add a delay or more verb with some nice percussion and hits to help fill the empty spaces?