I do listen to this style of music, sounds like some of those "chillout" compilations from about 10 years ago. I really like the subtle kick and the breath noises, and the synths are melodic without emerging as a catchy "hook" -- that's a good thing, this style doesn't have catchy hooks.
Love the break at 3:20.
The highs sound good to me, except for the scraping/cymbal noise that starts at 1:30. That one is a bit harsh and could be EQ'd better (or volume reduced) I think.
Overall the mix is very good, lots of subtle parts for my ears to pick out with headphones and lots of stereo separation. Well done!