Hey guys, was really bored and decided to try some weird shit. Hope you guys get as happy as I do from it! The mix isnt great but I just want to make sure its a good song before I get it all nice and shiny.
https://soundcloud.com/eld-music/static-second-draft/s-8Zv7v

P.S. Reverb cuts out sometimes so please try and look past that.

Wow! I really like what you did with this!

The vocals really do a good job of accenting it, as well!

Nice job!

Thanks!

While I think it's a great idea and overall sounds pretty good, you really need to work on transitions and buildups