sounds like u brought in all the drums a little early, then it just kinda drags on. maybe make the structure a little more understandable? dont look up song structuring on youtube tho cuz thats lame, do what sounds right and picture urself hearing or even playing that at a party.... not a festival , a party.. where its kinda awkward cuz there arent too many people. what would everyone do? try and make effects and sounds that the weird kid at the party would get down to, or get confused or anything. controlled chaos in variation n moderation can take the techno u make and add ur personality to it. hope that made any sense b