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Leonardo Genzolini

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Progressive House WIP - need feedback.
« on: January 17, 2016, 12:18:49 pm »
Hi everyone. I have been working on this track for a long time now, and I decided to post it here to hear what you guys think of it.

I haven't done a proper mastering yet.

Thanks in advance!

https://soundcloud.com/leonardogenzolini/ambra-work-in-progress/s-jG1SV
« Last Edit: January 19, 2016, 08:54:53 am by Leonardo Genzolini »
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Re: Progressive House WIP - no master.
« Reply #1 on: January 17, 2016, 10:00:47 pm »
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Re: Progressive House WIP - no master.
« Reply #2 on: January 18, 2016, 11:22:22 am »
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Re: Progressive House WIP - need feedback.
« Reply #3 on: January 19, 2016, 01:26:01 pm »
Try add some more elements in it. To me, it sound kinda empty. The idea is cool though, but it need more work on the "design" if you know what I mean, keep it interesting! ;)
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Re: Progressive House WIP - need feedback.
« Reply #4 on: January 19, 2016, 03:18:02 pm »
Quote from: JayDBe on January 19, 2016, 01:26:01 pm
Try add some more elements in it. To me, it sound kinda empty. The idea is cool though, but it need more work on the "design" if you know what I mean, keep it interesting! ;)

Thank you for the advices! :)
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Re: Progressive House WIP - need feedback.
« Reply #5 on: January 19, 2016, 05:06:49 pm »
I think it is deep/future house
I love drop !
Can you send me message ? I have proposal to you :)
https://soundcloud.com/re_volve
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Re: Progressive House WIP - need feedback.
« Reply #6 on: January 20, 2016, 11:01:11 am »
Quote from: Revolve on January 19, 2016, 05:06:49 pm
I think it is deep/future house
I love drop !
Can you send me message ? I have proposal to you :)
https://soundcloud.com/re_volve

Sent! Check your inbox mate :)
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Re: Progressive House WIP - need feedback.
« Reply #7 on: January 20, 2016, 01:02:49 pm »
I think the synths need to come down in the mix a little. Also the last lower note on that synth riff (at 2:26 and 2:33 for example) is clashing with the others.


More generally, the track is a bit bare as matey said above. It needs moar things. I like that bassline though, and the beats are solid.
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Re: Progressive House WIP - need feedback.
« Reply #8 on: January 20, 2016, 05:28:11 pm »
Quote from: Bertie South on January 20, 2016, 01:02:49 pm
I think the synths need to come down in the mix a little. Also the last lower note on that synth riff (at 2:26 and 2:33 for example) is clashing with the others.


More generally, the track is a bit bare as matey said above. It needs moar things. I like that bassline though, and the beats are solid.

Thanks!
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Re: Progressive House WIP - need feedback.
« Reply #9 on: January 20, 2016, 05:59:43 pm »
Nice one!  First, what I like:
The supersaw chords are awesome.
The bass is nice and thick, and the syncopated rhythm is very energetic.
Nice sidechained risers, good buildups.
Overall a good mix -- not muddy or too busy! Sounds really good.

What I'd work on:
As others said, more elements. The first 1:30 especially, could use some melody OR pad OR arpeggio.. something besides the bassline.
The silent moments at 2:00 and 4:00.. I'm torn on that. I like it because it leaves me hanging, but I feel like there could be a little something in there to tell me the song's not over yet. Maybe a reverse reverb of the synth line that's coming, a quiet little riser, a sample of something/someone...

Overall, great work!
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Re: Progressive House WIP - need feedback.
« Reply #10 on: January 20, 2016, 06:11:12 pm »
Quote from: dizzwave on January 20, 2016, 05:59:43 pm
Nice one!  First, what I like:
The supersaw chords are awesome.
The bass is nice and thick, and the syncopated rhythm is very energetic.
Nice sidechained risers, good buildups.
Overall a good mix -- not muddy or too busy! Sounds really good.

What I'd work on:
As others said, more elements. The first 1:30 especially, could use some melody OR pad OR arpeggio.. something besides the bassline.
The silent moments at 2:00 and 4:00.. I'm torn on that. I like it because it leaves me hanging, but I feel like there could be a little something in there to tell me the song's not over yet. Maybe a reverse reverb of the synth line that's coming, a quiet little riser, a sample of something/someone...

Overall, great work!

Thank you! I really appreciate your words! :)
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