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Supersaw n good melody?
« on: January 16, 2016, 03:06:07 am »
Hey dudes! ^^

well i need some feedback about this song when i make, all track is unfinished i work on your structure, quality, n more

well if you have some thing to say about my tune, please tell me :D

Link -> https://soundcloud.com/articofc/wip/s-249K7
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Re: Supersaw n good melody?
« Reply #1 on: January 16, 2016, 03:31:15 am »
I like where it's going. However, at some points it's hard to hear the supersaw over the bass. I suggest you do some leveling and compression to balance the two out.

Keep at it, man. :)
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Re: Supersaw n good melody?
« Reply #2 on: January 16, 2016, 04:05:08 am »
Tnx for you feedback erik!!

yeah i miss a lot the lead on the drop n other parts os the song, but i work on this now n all entire music to ^^
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Re: Supersaw n good melody?
« Reply #3 on: January 17, 2016, 12:38:42 pm »
love the sound of it! Great chord progression aswell.
i think erikF hit this nail on the head tho. perhaps adding some sidechain to that kick aswell so it shines more through. and bring forth that beautiful melody you have! it leaves me kind of in a state of blue balls, as i can barely hear it. but perhaps that´s why i like it so much... not really sure about that one.

followed you on soundcloud, since i really want to hear the finished product!
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Re: Supersaw n good melody?
« Reply #4 on: January 17, 2016, 02:29:52 pm »
Some sidechain will definitely help, it just matters if that's the rhythm the OP wants.
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Re: Supersaw n good melody?
« Reply #5 on: January 17, 2016, 04:59:45 pm »
Listening on laptop speakers so can't give a lot of feedback on production.

However I would say add some vocals to this track, gets kinda boring even with the good structure and arrangement you have. Thats my opinion however.

Love the progression!

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Re: Supersaw n good melody?
« Reply #6 on: January 17, 2016, 05:09:57 pm »
I agree with the others, the song is really good!
As the others said, the bass is a little bit loud compared to the chords and you could sidechain it a little bit, but during the drop it sounds way better ^^
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Re: Supersaw n good melody?
« Reply #7 on: January 17, 2016, 07:14:04 pm »
Love the vocal chops that come in around 2:15, but as others have stated the mix between the bass and the supersaw could be improved.
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