I like it. I feel like it needs more, unless vocals are being added onto it.

Pretty well mixed imo

Cool song man!

but i see your problem on the structure of the song, well try to make a melody, n after you try something like intro, break, drop, but all thing have some percent of your melody, when this, your music have a logic sense, and this is good because after you make this you song still good to work, n make more thing, n finish all structure. ^^

but keep it up man, n have good work

Vocals are definitely in order otherwise this becomes just your regular beat on soundcloud. Try using pretty gamous rap acapellas. What I've found lately is to use older rap acapellas. early 2000's maybe. As everyone is using the current rap songs of today