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No mastering done, just want to know what people think!
« on: January 15, 2016, 11:35:36 pm »
Hey guys, nothing much has been done in terms of mastering, but wanted to see what you guys thought of this idea!

https://clyp.it/ojeqhbtb

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Re: No mastering done, just want to know what people think!
« Reply #1 on: January 16, 2016, 03:34:38 am »
I love where this is going.

I think it's lacking some mid frequencies during the chorus/drop section. Maybe add another layer with higher mids?

This could be an artistic touch, but I think the sidechaining needs less release.

Keep at it dude :)

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Re: No mastering done, just want to know what people think!
« Reply #2 on: January 16, 2016, 04:16:10 am »
Same thing when erik say, put more layers on mid section, "pad´s" is a good option to work on this track, try some pads on intro, and build up to!! ^^

check you melody keys on the drop togheter with the intro, all two ideas dont have a good combination in the same song.

but keep work on it man have good ideas! :)

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Re: No mastering done, just want to know what people think!
« Reply #3 on: January 16, 2016, 08:28:02 am »
Hey, I like the drop, but the overall the song sounds too empty. Try adding pads to the beginning and more in the drop? In my opinion the keys on the beginning dont really match with the drop, but thats just my opinion. Drop has potential if more sounds were added. Sounds Flumie

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Re: No mastering done, just want to know what people think!
« Reply #4 on: January 16, 2016, 03:16:49 pm »
Like everyone said, cool drop but the mix is lacking oomph. I think that melody that comes in at 36s is slightly too pitchy? Maybe drop it an octave and it would be less piercing?

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Re: No mastering done, just want to know what people think!
« Reply #5 on: January 17, 2016, 01:26:42 am »
Yeah it was mostly a quick idea I put together, thanks for all your input! I'll definitely continue it and change some stuff up :)

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Re: No mastering done, just want to know what people think!
« Reply #6 on: January 17, 2016, 11:37:40 am »
I really like the melody, but I'd choose a synth instead of the piano. The general idea is good, keep working on it!