Ok, I'll bite

- it's got that FUSE sound, certainly, and if you're strictly looking to nail that early / mid 90s Hawtin, you've more-or-less done so - there's space in the mix and the flow is good. However, if you're looking for it to be a more modern approach, more akin to his Orange or later Minus stuff, it needs to be shorter, tighter and compressed more to 'breathe' and flow. Don't take it as criticism, as such though!
Regarding the 303 sound, personally I just had to go hardware in the end, albeit a x0xb0x, it's a sound you need to nail to have right effect. We did a remix with Phosycon, was OK but then redid it with the x0xb0x and it made all the difference. If you can get one, even borrow one, do it, so much better. You can here what I mean here -