Holy cow man I see so much potential in this track. Everything musically about this track is very very sound. Chords are wonderful and great to listen to. Your arrangement is great as well
Your mixing however i feel could use some work. Get that kick pumping mono in the center of the mix, as well as your sub. Get those intro plucks cleaned out a tad too.
If you spend some time in ozone or maximus mastering this thing again you could have a really fantastic track here dude.
