Mixing is just generally muddy on these, honestly. I really like the ideas presented, but it seems like your sound hasn't fully developed yet and you just need more time. I would suggest EQ'ing out the lows or mids of some of the reverb-ey plucks and playing around with the stereo field to get a wider sound. This stuff has a lot of untapped potential, and with some hard work, I am sure you can make some really solid stuff