I like the high triplet lead at the beginning, it's really tech-y and sounds good. The snares that come in though I'm not especially fond of, and think they could use a bit of EQ work. The first build is good, and the sweeps fit perfectly.

Alright I'm gonna be honest here: I hate the vocal samples used. I don't think they're very fit, and they take up a lot of space in the mix.

The mixing/mastering needs work ESPECIALLY at the low end (kicks don't stand out at all and bass isn't very recognizable), but this is a WIP so that's understandable.

One thing I really did like was the snare roll into the drop. It comes up again a couple times too, and those sounded really good.

There's a lot going on in the drops which is good, but I'm not sure if they fit well with each other. I know that probably sounds very vague, but I'm finding it hard to find the groove of the track and bounce to it. Maybe that was your intent though.

Keep going on this one, it definitely has potential!

I agree with Shikimo on basically everything he said:

Snare at beginning is a little rough. Sounds very High-End heavy (same with the hi-hats I think). I like the triplets, but maybe change the synth thats playing them.

Kick doesn't stand out during the drop, and maybe there should be a kick at some point in the intro, maybe around 0:19. The first riser into the breakdown has a little bit too much High-End as well.

The Breakdown rocks. I love the atmosphere. The reverb-snare, shaker effects, it's all really really good. At around 1:09 it gets a little muddy, but that's good on some extent since it's rising. I do like the vocal sample that goes on, but for some reason it sounds awkward right at the beginning. You do get used to it though and I do enjoy it haha.

The drop needs a ton of side-chaining. All the sounds are fighting for the same space it seems, and nothing is really coming through besides whatever is loudest... which isn't necessarily good haha.

Not a bad track though I really do like it, has a ton of "Dillon Francis-esque" attributes

Also if that is your friend's voice recording from a phone, keep it: it's amazing haha.

It seems to me that the main woodblock sounds in your drop aren't quite in key.... What you've got in it right now is (B - B - B - B -  A# - G#) when (B - B - B - B - G - F#) would work better harmonically imo.

Also, everything is way too compressed and the kick doesn't have enough "punch" to it because it's attack has been flattened out by the compression.

Well Thanks every one! since you all see potential in the track I will finish it!

Thanks for all the good feedback!

And yes, it really is my friend recorded from my phone hahaha!

I agree with everyone else. The drop needs to be harder. A harder kick? Sausage Fattener?, But i like the concept

Here it is. I ''bought(...)'' Sausage fattener and used it on some composent of the drop. Tell me what you think!

On the version with sausagefattener, I honestly feel that the breakdown is too empty without the vocal chops. Bring them back. Other than that, this version is very close to being finished! Great job!