First thing, the most important rule in the "Sharing & Feedback" section is to first give a feedback to at least 3 tracks other users posted (for example for that which have little or no response). Be active not only with posting your own tracks but instead of this - spend a large ammount of time to listen to others and give them feedback Only in this way, the forum won't die, and everybody will be getting several opinions.

What about your track ? It must be more interesting. Maybe some effects, especially from 0:26. It dies here, for a moment. And I have the impression the sounds from drop come suddenly and if I were you, I would try to put some of them to the intro or break in a different form. Generally, the drop is cool, it reminds me something like 'Slim Shady' from Eminem :p Continue the work, good luck !

Hey I'm new to this but I wanna give you my opinion. I feel that a little more should happen on the build up. Effects or something. And try changing up the kick patterns in your drop. Overall I really like your song, reminds of a songi heard but can't think of which right now.