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HOW CAN I MAKE THIS BETTER ?!
« on: January 14, 2016, 04:16:46 am »
What can I add or even take out of this song to make it any better ? I can't help but to feel like its super repetitive...

https://soundcloud.com/brotege/twisted-1/s-WWXXw

Also don't mind the last drop, i was testing out that sound
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Re: HOW CAN I MAKE THIS BETTER ?!
« Reply #1 on: January 14, 2016, 06:06:26 am »
first off, i'd say its nicely eq'd and mixed compared to your previous stuff...ur moving aalong nicely...the hi hats need to be crisper imo, the main synth needs more processing (reverb, distortion(CC)...a little pizzazz to make it fatter, but i like its minimal feel...im off tomorrow sucka, come thru
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Re: HOW CAN I MAKE THIS BETTER ?!
« Reply #2 on: January 14, 2016, 05:07:21 pm »
In the main rhythm, all the notes are the same length. Vary them so the instrument sounds more alive. I like the panning; you could go much further in placing single hits of instruments around in the stereo field, and maybe stereo delays timed to support rhythms in the music. Cool ending... ties it together.
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