The synths in the second half were awsome, they combined very well and were super interesting to me. I also liked your SFX. The only problem that I have with it are the drums being a bit plain for me. I feel like the melody in the second half is pretty big but the drums are not very complimentary being how simple they sounded.

kick has too much mid/treble. take a high shelf eq and pull down everything above 400hz a few db, and maybe bring the kick itself down a db or two as well. i don't hear a snare anywhere? there's a clapish thing near the start but it's almost too quiet to hear. the bit at 1:30 needs more going on. like some chords or a bass or both.