It´s OK, but too short to say anything about. 51 seconds....
Nope it's not...
About that WIP, First we have a problem in the third chords. It doesn't match with the first two. Vocals are too dry. Put some reverb on it. (Clone it, and put reverb on one. This will create a nice ambiance
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So, Snare/claps is cool. Kick is way too weak. You'll need to layer what you have with a punchier kick.
Except that everything sounds very cool and promising. Keep working man
