Author Topic: Experimental WIP (need feedback) (Read 4868 times)

Junklicious · « **on:** January 12, 2016, 07:14:09 pm »

Need some feedback on a recent WIP of mine. I can't decide whether I wanna finish it or not.
Any and all feedback is welcome!

https://soundcloud.com/junklicious/namless-wip/s-pqsZH

Nadav · « **Reply #1 on:** January 12, 2016, 07:56:58 pm »

I wanna see where it goes! It's basically 2 chords going back and forth, so what's gonna happen next? What's going to break it up? I say finish it. You've clearly put a good bit of thoughtful work into what you've built so far.

wildcat · « **Reply #2 on:** January 12, 2016, 08:31:10 pm »

Good start and Agree that you should take it somewhere.

Consider adding some white noise and fx as well to give it some movement.

It'd be nice to see you try to add some depth to that lead instrument you have. It sounds like it's a straight saw wave stab, see if you could either evolve that or choose something less electronic and more organic since everything else is electronic.

Also - rythmically, add some variation to that lead. If it's arpegiated pause every now and then or add a finishing variation to the 4th bar.

SHVKE · « **Reply #3 on:** January 12, 2016, 10:20:33 pm »

Agreed with the last two post above. I think it needs a bit more movement to introduce that lead. I do enjoy the melody!

Raero · « **Reply #4 on:** January 12, 2016, 11:59:56 pm »

Nice one! Try to make the snare more apparent, and work on the Eqing for everything.

Author Topic: Experimental WIP (need feedback) (Read 4868 times)

Junklicious

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