I just listened on my laptop speakers.

Sounds good. Very full spectrum range, mix of textures, interesting use of stereo that kept me on my toes. Not sure if I have any suggestions for the mix.

Composition-wise it felt incomplete, like it was going to go somewhere after the soft part at the end...but then it just ended. You could easily add on an even "bigger" part to give it a kind of "grand finale".

Cool, good luck.

Nice song.  Enjoyed the chill intro and the change in pace at the first drop.  Really cool sounds throughout.

I noticed an issue similar to another post I just commented on, I'll just copy paste it here: I feel your Sub "808 trap" bass can be beefed up.  It seems quiet in relation to the rest of the track and it doesn't have that signature trap "impact".  Also, I noticed your Kick tick that you layered above it is quite thin and doesn't offer much punch.  Here's a random trap song I found that has what I'm talking about: https://soundcloud.com/partythieves/party-thieves-lazy-boyz-rise

Also, I feel like your percussive work in the intro could use a bit more variation.  Everything seems centered and a bit lifeless; try panning to add some movement and interest on your cymbals.  Also, the snare/cymbals could use a bit of an EQ cut in the mid range--I feel in certain areas it is competing too much with your plucks in the background.  You don't have to cut a whole lot, a short narrow cut in the appropriate range (I want to say from around 200-800hz) can give more space between the elements.

Speaking of your percussion, it seems a bit oversaturated and harsh.  Your percussion definitely stands out in the mix--albeit a bit too much and it takes a lot of the attention away from your other sounds (plucks/vocals).

Great work.  Looking forward to hearing more.

Wow. This is really good. What's the sound you use around 0:50 seconds? super dope.