writing as i listen. the intro is real nice man, i dig the clock in the background. Buildup is really well done but the part at 1:01 doesnt deliver. Try making it a bit bigger, maybe use a brighter piano, and a crash. The vocals during the drop are a bit loud imo, I really dig the chord progression though. The mix sounds nice and full here, I'm digging the incidentals you added, like right before the second part of the drop, that kind of growly background thing. not sure how I feel about the break after the drop, its not terrible. Couldn't even tell you what it is about it but first reaction was that something felt a little weird. Transition to the buildup is well done, it sounds better in context here than it did in the intro but I think you could still benefit from making the piano bigger. Also maybe some risers or white noise to fill out the spectrum. Also, I'm sure I don't have to tell you its missing an outro haha, but yeah man its pretty much there. Solid ideas, just need to polish up the mix a bit and it should be good to go!
