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Yes_Justin - Second Semester (Original Mix) tech
« on: January 12, 2016, 06:09:46 pm »
my techno project that I made before second semester... Any feed back would be great


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Re: Yes_Justin - Second Semester (Original Mix) tech
« Reply #1 on: January 12, 2016, 06:17:17 pm »
kick is sounding good to me at the start but the clap is a bit weak. the synths sound good as well but would really be brought out by some panning automation. I’m enjoyed the building at 1:30.

In general the rhythms here are great. I would like some of the other elements to gel better though. For example the synth that comes in at around 1:05 doesn’t gel well enough for me at 2:45 but that could be just taste.

all said I enjoyed it

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Re: Yes_Justin - Second Semester (Original Mix) tech
« Reply #2 on: January 13, 2016, 11:53:12 pm »
thanks so much  :D 8) :)

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Re: Yes_Justin - Second Semester (Original Mix) tech
« Reply #3 on: January 14, 2016, 12:01:40 am »
Nice track man,
Agree with a lot of what lighght said.
I feel like you could have done a bit more with the drops. They felt a bit empty to me.
As I said, Nice track tho man
Cheers

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Re: Yes_Justin - Second Semester (Original Mix) tech
« Reply #4 on: January 18, 2016, 12:25:20 am »
thanks so much :)