You need a solid drop dude! You need a sub bass that pumps and a PHAT kick & snare and a really cool saw/triangle synth thats automated via cutoff and LFO!


These dudes may inspire you - https://soundcloud.com/louisthechild

I reckon you could do something really awesome with this track if you get the main hook arrangement correct. Nice intro dude.

 Like everyone else said do a drop. Get a chord progression together and I would recommend a really wide saw wave synth and maybe some glide between notes. Add a bass and a sub to really fill the entire spectrum.

You have something really promising hear keep it up!