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Ricardo Hinds

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Hey,

I song write and produce, looking to release two tracks in Q1 of 2016. I know there is some great talent on this forum so would be cool if you could lend me your ears :P .

I'll link the the first song and depending on whether I get a response or not lol, I'll upload the second one this week also.

https://soundcloud.com/ricardohinds/going-downall-night-demo/s-OOvlH

Thanks!



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This is great, the effects throughout the track are amazing.  A lot of really nice elements running through it.

Thanks for sharing with us!  8)

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Very nice track mate :) ! But is the vocal not to loud ? (and maybe cut some low freq). That's one thing I noticed. Keep this good work :)

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Very nice track mate :) ! But is the vocal not to loud ? (and maybe cut some low freq). That's one thing I noticed. Keep this good work :)

Ah vocals are my weak point lol. Can never tell how loud/quiet they should be. I'll have a look in to that along with the low frequencies. Cheers!

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This is great, the effects throughout the track are amazing.  A lot of really nice elements running through it.

Thanks for sharing with us!  8)

Thank you dude! I'm happy you enjoyed  ;D ;D
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Very wave-y, I like that! More layering could benefit a lot! And you could try to ditch the last parts' vocal with some melody riff or sth, to make it more interesting to listen to, imo.

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Very wave-y, I like that! More layering could benefit a lot! And you could try to ditch the last parts' vocal with some melody riff or sth, to make it more interesting to listen to, imo.

Thanks dude! I'll look in to the layering and melody aspect. Thank you!  8)
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