Author Topic: EP Teaser/Could I get some feedback?? (Read 16222 times)

Jasher · « **on:** January 06, 2016, 02:02:52 am »

https://soundcloud.com/jasher-1/ep-announcement

These are all rough drafts, and the end products sound much better... Could I just get some general feedback?

Jasher · « **Reply #1 on:** January 06, 2016, 02:05:16 am »

https://soundcloud.com/jasher-1/tell-me-why-vip/s-ucCdh

Finished Version of "Tell me why VIP"... Can I get some opinions??

armanip · « **Reply #2 on:** January 06, 2016, 02:14:23 am »

So I'm listening to the Tell Me Why [VIP] I like your sounds in it and how its kind of trippy but the one thing I feel like, is it has so many different styles and switches between all of them so much that its hard me to grab onto something that really grabs my attention ya feel me? I think your on a good track with production but should have more of a focus.

armanip · « **Reply #3 on:** January 06, 2016, 02:17:05 am »

From the EP I really like the last song, I think its well done and is still your style but more focused

Blakelight · « **Reply #4 on:** January 06, 2016, 02:17:34 am »

not my kind of style but you first have some levels problem , one sound is really low the other is really LOUD so you need to fix levels , try also achieving some compression for the all thing to get together as the glue or the SSL , as wall try working on the Boomy bass sound , it kill all your spectrum as it's cut other frequency because it's too loud in my opinion !

Jasher · « **Reply #5 on:** January 06, 2016, 02:19:27 am »

Thanks for the Advice dude! I totally understand about what you mean with the sound hopping, and I wish I had arranged it a bit differently

Jasher · « **Reply #6 on:** January 06, 2016, 02:31:05 am »

Un-Mastered Version of Genesis (Last Song on EP Teaser), So don't judge to heavily

https://soundcloud.com/jasher-1/genesis-rough-mix/s-DORLI

clydesdale · « **Reply #7 on:** January 06, 2016, 03:05:47 am »

I agree with Blakelight. Check your master levels and loundness and compress some of the big peaks, they using up your dynamic range on most of the track. If I were to pick one thing to change about "Tell Me Why" it would probably be that vocal sample right at the beginning and at around 2:25, it isn't in tune with the track-- maybe move it's pitch around a bit to see if it sits in the mix better. Take my amateur advice for what it's worth, and then just do what you like and get your stuff out there.

Good Luck.

-clyde

Jasher · « **Reply #8 on:** January 06, 2016, 03:37:24 am »

Thanks for the advice man, and Thats actually really useful about the vocal being out of tune... Ill get on fixing that ASAP

ScottCampbell · « **Reply #9 on:** January 06, 2016, 04:10:39 am »

there are some really good ideas here man. the only thing i can critique is the levels like blakelight said. production is a little lacking but that comes with time. this is a solid ep though.

Jasher · « **Reply #10 on:** January 26, 2016, 01:02:41 pm »

EP is set to be released this Saturday!!

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