the melody is quite catchy! and i like how the kick punches through in the drop. however, i think the lead in the drop is a wee bit loud as well as the snare and hats, it "hurts" a little bit when i turn the volume up and especially the hats use a little bit too much of the space.
The progression and layout of the track itself is great, be careful tho, so it does not get to repetitive when you go into that second break, maybe chill it out with some strings.

i´ve got faith in this one! lookin foreward to hear the end result.

i think you should to that, perhaps an eq to filter out the higher frequencies on the lead might help out the mix in general.. just gotta try things out really and se how it turns out. the synthwork alltogether is good tho!
think you just have to listen to it and find the sweetspot where you like it best.