Author Topic: Hesitation | Brooding neuro/garage/trap vibes... feelsy  (Read 6729 times)

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Hesitation | Brooding neuro/garage/trap vibes... feelsy
« on: January 06, 2016, 03:46:28 am »
Would love any tips to make the mix/master shine a bit better. If you have any questions on how I made any of the sounds, let me know and I'd be happy to expound.
https://soundcloud.com/safeko/safeko-hesitation/s-PvPyl
Can anybody guess the origin of the dialogue sample?

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Re: Hesitation | Brooding neuro/garage/trap vibes... feelsy
« Reply #1 on: January 06, 2016, 10:11:48 pm »
This song has an interesting vibe. The atmospheric vocals are cool, and this song is full of some crazy sounds. If I had to mention something, I would say that the lead and snare feel a little buried under the higher pitched thing and the sub. Also, the piano seems a little quiet and dry. Nice track!

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Re: Hesitation | Brooding neuro/garage/trap vibes... feelsy
« Reply #2 on: January 08, 2016, 01:26:58 pm »
This song has an interesting vibe. The atmospheric vocals are cool, and this song is full of some crazy sounds. If I had to mention something, I would say that the lead and snare feel a little buried under the higher pitched thing and the sub. Also, the piano seems a little quiet and dry. Nice track!

Thanks for the feedback!

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Re: Hesitation | Brooding neuro/garage/trap vibes... feelsy
« Reply #3 on: January 08, 2016, 02:48:37 pm »
Basically just echoing what the previous poster said. It sounds cool but I feel like the sub is taking up wayyy too much headroom in the mix which is clouding the lead/snare.