I'm not sure if it's a deliberate decision to have the clock in the intro, the hats and the snare in the chorus be so quiet. They could be raised a few dBs so they're not drowned out by the other sounds in the track. I can't find any other mix-related issues. It's a very clean song tbh although I can't be 100% sure since soundclouds 128-bitrate thing is really fucking with the high-end of the track. I'm just going to assume the mix is balanced since it seems like you know exactly what you're doing. I'd want the track overall to a little louder though but that's pretty much it

Great song so far!!