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Need Constructive Feedback on My New Original Futuristic.
« on: January 11, 2016, 04:14:23 pm »
I just finished Futuristic and Put it up on soundcloud,and I'd love some constructive feedback.
You can listen to it here:
https://soundcloud.com/dj-unknown-29/futuristicoriginal-mix
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Re: Need Constructive Feedback on My New Original Futuristic.
« Reply #1 on: January 11, 2016, 05:19:38 pm »
Song sounds cool. the bass line sounds dope..in my opinion i would probably do something to the bass line towards the end to make it sound slightly different. either the texture/tone or eve the midi notes so it doesn't sound like you're listening to the 1st half of the song. maybe the snare drum could use more attack or punch idk.. awesome job
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Re: Need Constructive Feedback on My New Original Futuristic.
« Reply #2 on: January 12, 2016, 04:20:31 am »
Quote from: darkanddarkmusic on January 11, 2016, 05:19:38 pm
Song sounds cool. the bass line sounds dope..in my opinion i would probably do something to the bass line towards the end to make it sound slightly different. either the texture/tone or eve the midi notes so it doesn't sound like you're listening to the 1st half of the song. maybe the snare drum could use more attack or punch idk.. awesome job

Thank You!
I really liked this drop myself so I tried to make the song around that one drop score.
What about mixing and stereo imaging? :P
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Re: Need Constructive Feedback on My New Original Futuristic.
« Reply #3 on: January 12, 2016, 03:04:51 pm »
You should work on your chord progressions and melody in the break. Also, I recommend trying at least a little to not sound so generic imo. But if that is exactly what you're shooting for, please do! c:
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Re: Need Constructive Feedback on My New Original Futuristic.
« Reply #4 on: January 12, 2016, 05:10:51 pm »
Quote from: clearless on January 12, 2016, 03:04:51 pm
You should work on your chord progressions and melody in the break. Also, I recommend trying at least a little to not sound so generic imo. But if that is exactly what you're shooting for, please do! c:

Thank You.
I'm not really aiming for anything except making a track.
Of course it could be better and what not,but I was satisfied with this.
Didn't mean to sound generic.
Will try harder on my next tracks. ;)
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