I really like the idea! That drop has a TON of potential!
A bit of feedback: The drop lacks energy. I think part of that problem is that everything building up to it is super wide. The main chords on your drop are too narrow. I'd try and aim for a bigger kick. The one you have kind of gets lost in the mix. After having gotten very similar advice from a few people a little while back, I can tell you it's all about headroom. Create space where possible.
I really like the lead during the break. It almost sounds like something Sunny Lax would use. I think the bass could be a bit stronger during the drop as well.
Overall, I am a big fan of this track. I am aiming for constructive criticism here. I know that I am always looking for that on this forum so hopefully this has been helpful advice. Keep it up. Really dope so far!
