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Chillout Future Work in Progress (inspired by Mapps, Tennyson)
« on: January 11, 2016, 06:42:35 am »
https://soundcloud.com/seafarer1/deja-vu/s-1s93U

Let me know what should change!  Mix especially!  I will be adding much more as far as phrasing and many additional elements...

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Re: Chillout Future Work in Progress (inspired by Mapps, Tennyson)
« Reply #1 on: January 11, 2016, 07:27:05 am »
I'd tweak that tambourine-ish sound. It sounds very light, and in an unconvincing space that doesn't really glue with the rest of the track. I really dig the drop at 1:46.

I think you could make the vox sample from 1:06 - 1:15 into something more musically compelling. It's close, but could be stronger.

That marimba part that starts at 2:16 is cool, but starts to lose me after around 2:26 or so, and then gets a bit irritating. 2:36 - 2:46, I'd totally pull it out.

Cool stuff. Just some thoughts.
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Re: Chillout Future Work in Progress (inspired by Mapps, Tennyson)
« Reply #2 on: January 11, 2016, 05:50:04 pm »
Thanks man, that's some great feedback!  The tambourine-ish sound as in the main ride movement thing that comes in with the first beat?
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Re: Chillout Future Work in Progress (inspired by Mapps, Tennyson)
« Reply #3 on: January 11, 2016, 07:07:11 pm »
I second the comment about the tambourine. Other than that the vibes on this are sickk dude. Awesome job!