Author Topic: Dylan Hanson - "Shia LaBeouf"  (Read 5335 times)

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Dylan Hanson - "Shia LaBeouf"
« on: January 06, 2016, 03:42:57 am »
https://soundcloud.com/hanson5325/shia-labeouff

This is a track I have been working on inspired by Shia LaBeouf's "Just Do It" video.
Please give me any kind of feedback you have.

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Re: Dylan Hanson - "Shia LaBeouf"
« Reply #1 on: January 07, 2016, 03:36:59 pm »
Lol not gonna lie, I had to click on it because it said Shia LaBeouf. lol it's a cool track but it def made me giggle
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Re: Dylan Hanson - "Shia LaBeouf"
« Reply #2 on: January 07, 2016, 03:43:54 pm »
First thing, at 1:26 and 1:43 you can clearly hear a clicking sound which is upleasant and I think you should have removed it before publishing the finalized track (it's a problem with some cutoff automations on FL Studio). The sidechain needs to be stronger and the master needs to be louder in order to be in pair with professional EDM tracks. Also, the mix is really muddy, so you need to improve your EQing method both on the instruments and on the master; for that, try cutting the low end of instruments where you don't need it. Hope these suggestions can help you for your future releases!

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Re: Dylan Hanson - "Shia LaBeouf"
« Reply #3 on: January 07, 2016, 07:20:53 pm »
The sound design in this is amazing! Love the bass sounds. The only thing I have to say is I feel that the vocal doesn't fit at all with the track.